Cover: Looks great so far but here are some points: - Maybe go over your model's edges with a light opacity eraser on Photoshop as the edges on your cover at the moment are quite sharp - The left hand side around his thigh needs something - Shift the barcode so it doesn't bleed right onto the edges - What does #01ChipWon mean? - You need to add a gutter and then align your text using the gutter because at the moment you've got some bleeding and it's not aligned
Contents: - Fill that empty space just below the Contents title - Rub out those white lines that are around your model's head - Enlarge that Grimescene mag image that is on your leg - Remember your mag will have ads and spreads on 1, 2 and 3 pages so your numbering won't be as simple as 3 5 7 etc
who's he pointing to ? it looks a bit boring try make it look more like a music magazine
ReplyDeletealso the contents page is obvious that you cut out the images so make it look less obvious
ReplyDeleteCover:
ReplyDeleteLooks great so far but here are some points:
- Maybe go over your model's edges with a light opacity eraser on Photoshop as the edges on your cover at the moment are quite sharp
- The left hand side around his thigh needs something
- Shift the barcode so it doesn't bleed right onto the edges
- What does #01ChipWon mean?
- You need to add a gutter and then align your text using the gutter because at the moment you've got some bleeding and it's not aligned
Contents:
ReplyDelete- Fill that empty space just below the Contents title
- Rub out those white lines that are around your model's head
- Enlarge that Grimescene mag image that is on your leg
- Remember your mag will have ads and spreads on 1, 2 and 3 pages so your numbering won't be as simple as 3 5 7 etc